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القلب الجريح







Hello To all Of u


this My seconde topic In Here

I Don't Know Why

and I Have alot of Poems But I Never thought

that I publish it Before

But Now I Came to you With My Favorite One

and I Hope that You Like it



" it's talk about My First Love " She Don't Care









I Can't Believe I Pushed Away My First Love

We Had Plans To Marry , Chinese Baby , And Me Taking Out My Dreadful Ways

But Then Out From Above I Discover Our Love Wasn't Quite A Young White Dove

She Was A Shove From Sad , A Doze Of The Heart Broken Drug

She Would Push And Tug To Just Be Buds But I Was Bitten By The Frustrated Bug

So I Just Whispered " You Don't Care"

Quite Shocking To My Very Own Soul

I'm Not Use To Being Told That A Love I Tried So Hard To Uphold

Was Being Consoled To Fold And Hold Till The World Around Turned Old

So I Foaled A Stronghold And Patrol My Deserted Threshold

Untold That My Action Could Mold Into A Cold Pothole

Oh My God "You Don't Care"

Regret Is A Cure , Love Is The Doctor And Your The Patient

Upon Weighment I've Realized That The Treatment Hadn't Been Pleasant

A Gram Of Confusion , A Milligram Of Resentment , And A Bottle Of Could-Have-Been Moments Discover Absent

I'd Recommend That I Stop Being A Tyrant , Quit Acting Like An Infant And Recognize That Your Queen Is Vacant

Before This Thing Worsens And All My Conscience Couldn't Silent Is The Little Voice Inside

Repeating Ever So Softly "You Don't Care"

It's Really Hard Accepting There's No Text Greeting Me With A "Good Morning Baby"

So I Decide To Agree To Be The Best He.

To Lead By Example And Carve A Place Every Man Envy With Pure Glee

To Rarely Make A Mistake, To See Sandy Who Reacted Poorly Become Slightly Shiny Continually

Still I Feel A Void , A Overwhelming Degree Of Sadness That Pushes Me To Ask For Seconds Please

Running Back To You, "Didn't You Hear Her, No More...Wait...You Don't Care"

I'm Not Asking To Be With You Again, Not Asking To Start From Where We Left Off

Wouldn't Dare Ask To Hold, Just Asking To Be In Your Presence When You Lift-Off

I'm Far-Off From Where I Should Be For You , Praying Not To Disappear, Not To Fall-Off

Maybe Later In Life I'll Face-Off My Past , Then I'll Find Out If I Should Pick-Off Or Wipe-Off

All This To Once Again To Be Waiting For You Down The Aisle Because Right Now I'm Off

You Don't Stand A Chance, "She'll Never Say Yes...Oh Yea....You Don't Care"




I Hope you Like it

and I Promise it won't be My Last topic

Take Care Everyone
مرامية
ur poem is so cool
I like so much
it showes how sesetive u r

but u have some mistakes
I don't know if u don't mind my corrections
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keep going
القلب الجريح
ofcourse i dont minde my sister >> thank you about you forword to my topic



alkalb aljareh
روعة
Hi

I Like it so much

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القلب الجريح
مشكوره اختي روعه على الاطراء وسوري ما مداني اكتب انجليزي لان مستعجل شوي خخخخخخخخخخخخخخخخ




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القلب الجريح
محمد
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